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imprinted sole
on the welcome mat
push over (shove off)
always there
with welcome arms (stay, won’t you?)
       comforting words (but you can!)
mostly ignored
with thick bristles (better for taking a smear)
       dirt surrounding the edges (to give the used look)
never a sound
for doormats can’t speak
anticipate the need (someone’s coming)
expect the use
fear the departure (they leave, again)
imprinted sole
imprinted soul
©2005-2010 ~asazephyr
:iconasazephyr:

Author's Comments

this was actually the first piece of poetry i was sort of pleased with...
any critiquing would be welcomed, as i am always trying to improve my writing.

i think the poem pretty much speaks for itself.

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